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all seeing eyes - WASTELAND MODS ([info]wastelanders) wrote,
@ 2008-09-18 19:02:00


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Entry tags:concrit

[ CRITIQUE ]

CONCRIT


Here is the mandatory crit post of lore. As implied, there's no skimping out of this; you must reply to this post with your character journal before you reply to any character entries or create your own. Outright bashing will not be tolerated; the name of the game is constructive criticism, that's constructive with a capital 'C'. You can comment to other players signed in or anonymously, but players are allowed to specify if they'd prefer it one way or another. Respect that.

Be mature!

Please comment with the following:

APPLICATION: A link to your application will suffice.
CHARACTER: Your character's name.
FANDOM: Your character's series.
TIMELINE: Where in the respective series your character comes from.
CONTACT: Email, AIM, MSN-- these all work.
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Please specify which you're most comfortable with.
OTHER: Anything else?






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[info]heartstop
2008-09-19 01:54 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here.
CHARACTER: Rolo Lamerouge.
FANDOM: Code Geass.
TIMELINE: Post-death.
CONTACT: mad4bananaz @ aim!
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either is fine, as concrit is concrit is concrit.

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(no subject) - [info]geassreceived, 2008-12-17 10:42 pm UTC

noahism
2008-09-19 02:31 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here.
CHARACTER: Tyki Mikk.
FANDOM: D.Gray-Man.
TIMELINE: After China/ Before Edo encounter.
CONTACT: Gaslight Romance (AIM)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Would prefer signed in.

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steadfast
2008-09-19 02:42 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here.
CHARACTER: Leo.
FANDOM: Fire Candy.
TIMELINE: End of volume II.
CONTACT: Gaslight Romance (AIM)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Would prefer signed in.

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traintrip
2008-09-19 02:46 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here
CHARACTER: Yoshino Takatsuki.
FANDOM: Hourou Musuko.
CONTACT: Gaslight Romance (AIM)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Would prefer signed in.

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[info]fourteenth
2008-09-19 06:34 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: ♪
CHARACTER: Allen Walker
FANDOM: D. Gray-man
TIMELINE: Chapter 170/171.
CONTACT: Savinsilk on AIM; kay.willow on Google Talk
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in if you feel comfortable with it, otherwise I'll deal. ♥

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[info]losingpetals
2008-09-20 01:15 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here~
CHARACTER: Kanda Yuu
FANDOM: D. Gray-Man
TIMELINE: ~chapter 170 -- after the mission with Allen and Miranda ends, before making it home.
CONTACT: suicidalchime (AIM), end.of.sanctuary (GTalk)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either!

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[info]arisonatine
2008-09-21 08:32 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here
CHARACTER: Rhode Kamelot
FANDOM: D.Gray-Man
TIMELINE: post Ch. 158
CONTACT: Kurauniente [AIM]; x.champuru.x@homtail.com [MSN]
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either is fine. ♥

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[info]bookbound
2008-09-23 05:58 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here.
CHARACTER: Lavi
FANDOM: D.Gray-Man
TIMELINE: Chapter 170
CONTACT: apapazukamori (AIM), flintwheel (google talk)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either one. :)

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[info]sylvan
2008-09-25 03:13 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: ♐
CHARACTER: Fran
FANDOM: Final Fantasy XII
TIMELINE: Post-game, pre-RW
CONTACT: Savinsilk on AIM; kay.willow on Google Talk
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in if you feel comfortable with it, otherwise I'll deal. ♥

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[info]chosen
2008-09-27 09:26 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here~
CHARACTER: Buffy Summers
FANDOM: Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
TIMELINE: Between S4E22 and S5E01. ♥
CONTACT: suicidalchime (AIM), end.of.sanctuary (GTalk)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either/or!

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[info]buymorelifer
2008-10-07 02:45 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here
CHARACTER: Chuck Bartowski
FANDOM: Chuck
TIMELINE: Post Season 1
CONTACT: apapazukamori
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either one.

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[info]papercranes
2008-10-11 08:31 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here.
CHARACTER: Nunnally Lamperouge
FANDOM: Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion
TIMELINE: Before the end of series.
CONTACT: atomicfusillade
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: either/or
OTHER: don't be kind; i can take it.

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(no subject) - [info]bookbound, 2009-02-19 05:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]papercranes, 2009-02-20 04:28 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]iwhip, 2009-02-20 06:22 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]papercranes, 2009-02-20 10:27 am UTC

[info]dualisolate
2008-10-20 03:05 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here
CHARACTER: Sachiko[/Chomesuke]
FANDOM: D.Gray-Man
TIMELINE: posthumous, short some memories and half re-written [i.e. Akuma mindset vs. reformed perspective]
CONTACT: Kurauniente [AIM & Google]; x.champuru.x@hotmail.com [MSN]
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either. ♥

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[info]geassreceived
2008-11-18 07:09 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: HERE.
CHARACTER: Suzaku Kururugi
FANDOM: Code Geass
TIMELINE: Post-Series
CONTACT: apapazukamori @ AIM
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either.
OTHER: Feedback is ♥

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[info]sharkbite
2008-11-18 08:26 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here.
CHARACTER: Superbi Squalo
FANDOM: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
TIMELINE: Immediately after his first appearance.
CONTACT: NinjaJaws@AIM
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in.
OTHER: HMD POST

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(no subject) - saave, 2008-12-24 06:49 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]sharkbite, 2008-12-24 06:52 am UTC

[info]spring_rain
2008-11-19 11:58 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: ♥
CHARACTER: Yamamoto Takeshi
FANDOM: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
TIMELINE: Right before the TYL arc, before he meets up with 14!Tsuna and Gokudera.
CONTACT: AIM: yakyuu to katana
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in.
OTHER: I can has milk?

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2008-12-18 02:11 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]spring_rain, 2008-12-18 12:13 pm UTC
(no subject) - saave, 2008-12-24 06:49 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]spring_rain, 2008-12-24 06:55 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2009-02-10 01:25 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]spring_rain, 2009-02-10 02:18 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]dame_dame, 2009-02-10 05:00 am UTC

[info]explosivestorm
2008-11-24 05:38 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: DIE!
CHARACTER: Gokudera Hayato
FANDOM: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
TIMELINE:Just before he got thrust into the TYL arc.
CONTACT: rukariel @ AIM
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in preferred, but whatever goes.
OTHER: Gimmeh your concrit! :D?

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(no subject) - saave, 2008-12-24 06:49 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]explosivestorm, 2008-12-24 06:54 am UTC

[info]ravir
2008-11-29 10:29 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: hay thar
CHARACTER: Misa Amane.
FANDOM: Death Note.
TIMELINE: Post-first arc.
CONTACT: AIM: Peltted.
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Prefer anon, honestly, but I'll take either. <3
OTHER: Tell me right away! Brutal honesty is good.

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[info]pledge
2008-11-30 01:28 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: onoes the fail.
CHARACTER: Sumeragi Kururu
FANDOM: Air Gear
TIMELINE: post-match with the White Wolves
CONTACT: AIM: ainissesthai
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: i don't care. signed in is preferred but whatever.
OTHER: see a problem? don't put it off -- let me know right away.

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(no subject) - [info]arashi_no_ou, 2009-01-21 01:25 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]unnamed, 2009-01-21 01:34 am UTC

[info]lol_cockroach
2008-12-14 03:40 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here
CHARACTER: Belphegor
FANDOM: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
TIMELINE: Just after the Varia arc
CONTACT: raethestampede@gmail or lysdexicmun on AIM
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either is fine! I don't mind <3
OTHER: Feel free to rip me to shreds if I'm not doing it right--I really want to get better <3

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[info]bythebook
2008-12-15 01:09 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: ✍
CHARACTER: Bookman
FANDOM: D. Gray-man
TIMELINE: Shortly before the Kaitou G incident
CONTACT: Savinsilk on AIM; kay.willow on Google Talk
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Signed in if you feel comfortable with it, otherwise I'll deal. ♥

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[info]arashi_no_ou
2008-12-15 04:58 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Here.
CHARACTER: Minami "Ikki" Itsuki
FANDOM: Air Gear
TIMELINE: Pre-Gram Scale.
CONTACT: damejuudaime on AIM
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either, I suppose.

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[info]torankusu
2008-12-15 04:58 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: HERE
CHARACTER: Trunks Briefs
FANDOM: Dragonball GT
TIMELINE: post-series/post-apocalypse
CONTACT: emudii (aim) (gtalk) (msn)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either

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[info]lovereborn
2008-12-15 06:00 am UTC (link)
APPLICATION: Link!
CHARACTER: Shirley Fenette
FANDOM: Code Geass
TIMELINE: Post episode 13 of R2.
CONTACT: RPGuitar (AIM)
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either way is fine.

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[info]pass_it_on
2008-12-15 03:21 pm UTC (link)
APPLICATION: here
CHARACTER: Jomy Marcus Shin
FANDOM: Toward the Terra
TIMELINE: End of series
CONTACT: shootthamoon at gmail dot com
SIGNED IN/ANONYMOUS: Either is fine.
OTHER: My permanent/general concrit post is here

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